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Esfandiar C. Hale
Your last lines in every poem are just so good. 
4 years agoReply
MarkTwain2.0
Thanks :D
4 years agoReply
Hope Smith
I love this! Your poems/songs have this raw emotion to them that's just amazing. Plus I agree with Cheeto, you have your own style which is SO COOL. Seriously, please keep posting new poems and songs, they are all honestly so good
4 years agoReply
MarkTwain2.0
Aww, thank you! I'll keep 'em coming!
4 years agoReply
MarkTwain2.0
I'm working on another right now. I'll give you guys a little spoiler.

The gummy bears mean nothing.
4 years agoReply
Hope Smith
@MarkTwain2.0, gummy bears? hmmmm....

I cant wait to read it!!
4 years agoReply
Esfandiar C. Hale
ikr! His poems are SO good! He style is very unique and conveys emotions and feelings through his words.
4 years agoReply
MarkTwain2.0
I wrote this feeling very beat down on today. Please no hate comments on this one. IDC about the others but this one, please no.
4 years agoReply
This is actually really good, and I get it, I often write poems that are based off emotion and how I feel.

Never mentioned it but I also like your rhyme scheme and poem structure, it stays consistent and there's usually a certain style you possess. I kinda find it hard to stick to a certain poetry style, so nice job! <3
4 years agoReply
MarkTwain2.0
@Cheeto, thanks! I actually have no clue what style of poetry I'm using, and quite honestly, I legit have no clue how poetry even works, so I'm just kind of winging it.
4 years agoReply
@MarkTwain2.0, same XD
4 years agoReply
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