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Holy schmokes. This was heart-wrenching as well as an eye-opener too. But BEN. Did you expect me to get over what just happened to poor bby Ben?? ;_;
Tartarus has literally been watching the fight and I could just say why didn't he do something to save Ben (since he and Rhea have a son(s) or maybe he meant it in a general way because the souls go to him... and I may be wrong in this all (although in the actual(?) mythology Rhea and Hades were together but this is fiction so like this statement is probably irrelevant..ANYWAYS, another reveal.)
Fay finding her strength is great and that part when she was 'What would Eris do?' and Tartarus was like no sweetie you should focus on you and like 'What would Fay do?' that's a nice touch but this scene.
THIS SCENE.
I wanted to question your decision like why must this happened to Fay and Ben? Like HISTORY HAS JUST REPEATED AGAIN AND IT'S JUST?? Just let Fay and Ben be together alright why must you break my heart ;_;
But then like, I knew rationally it needed to happen in this story because it pretty much awaken Fay's realization about herself and her power (really, Andromeda and her being MIA when Fay needs her, also that sentence when Fay was like, Andromeda just wanted her to realise HER own worth...wow that's great.)
And I see what you did there with THE MARK OF ERIS on Fay's squad tsk tsk it's brilliant how it was slotted in the story.
Still, Ben though :'(