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茗那
感謝參與 (*´꒳`*)/
「不知為何生來有翅膀，也不明白為何非得眷戀這片天」這幾句讓我特別有感。常常，我們都不會知道那些「為什麼」，尤其是長大中的孩子，他們得先飛得夠遠，然後「飛就對了」。
通常那是痛苦的。但在這裡他們獲得了光，太好了呢///

△但好像沒有感受到與祝福有關的內容（因為是個人感受所以都可以討論）
1 week agoReply
無名
寫的時候想法是未來深不可測，但只要持續前進，終究會有一束光照拂。

類似祝福努力之人會在因緣際會下找到一束光，但看來表達的還是不夠直觀明顯……
1 week agoReply
茗那
原來是這樣，那ok 了！
抱歉，是我沒有想到是這種角度，當然沒有問題，祝福本來就可以是任何樣子。
把整首詩作為祝福，給徬徨的人們，從第三變成第一人稱視角了，感謝你讓我發現了不同的詮釋祝福的方式 ( Ꙭ)⸝ෆ
1 week agoReply
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