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DUCE
@晨星．死神前輩，上菜囉
5 months agoReply
晨星．死神
謝謝啦～看來我的廚藝還得加強（？
（火開太大了）

這只是初稿，之後應該還會再修一次。想請問一下，你看到哪一章的時候，會覺得「不想再看下去」嗎？
5 months agoReply
DUCE
@晨星．死神,不會，因為篇幅短而且章節量還少，而且還能理解在演什麼
但如果長篇讀起來跟現在一樣很不順暢的話，恐怕前幾章就會看不下去了
5 months agoReply
晨星．死神
@DUCE,反正應該不會太長，這種故事我也寫不到長篇～
那，想請問最後一個問題（但好像有點離題了）
覺得有需要設為十八禁嗎，我很想移掉，但又怕有碰到限制級的線
5 months agoReply
DUCE
@晨星．死神,完全沒有必要，雖然寫的內容好像很血腥但我不覺得有18禁的內容
5 months agoReply
晨星．死神
@DUCE,好的,再次謝謝你
5 months agoReply
DUCE
@晨星．死神,沒事，義大利式書評有幫到你就好，看不懂的話歡迎提問，反正這個系列本來就主打抽象但不反對提問
5 months agoReply
晨星．死神
@DUCE,挺抽象的沒錯，但看得懂（順帶一提我也喜歡吃義大利麵，雖然微波食品好像不健康😂
5 months agoReply
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