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Tolerh sponsored 100coins for Issue 27!
感謝閱評
6 months agoReply
Tolerh
感謝您的評論！
對於原稿的評價，您的評論非常精確且客觀！
對於kado的參賽格式，我已經做完了結構性的調整，以及細部潤稿。
若大大有興趣，也可以移至kado平台觀看哦！
因為比較趕的關係，PNN平台還沒同步，哈哈！
再次感謝您的評價！🥺
6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
那你貼錯連結給我了ＸＤ

6 months agoReply
Tolerh
@朝晞Ashinari ,😵‍💫😂我應該是修到頭昏眼花了....
6 months agoReply
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