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剪月
好喜歡這章的描寫……很有畫面感！
3 days agoReply
林谷龍
謝謝大大的喜愛。
1 day agoReply
突破口上的貓
雞吃了灌注真氣的土豆，會不會變成真氣雞😂
肉質應該是靈藥等級。
1 month agoReply
林谷龍
肉質Q彈，鮮嫩多汁。
1 month agoReply
北海沙丁魚
看這部一陣子了來留個言吧。
真的很喜歡大大的文字，功底了得且不會淪於詞藻堆砌，尤其喜歡章節名稱。
2 months agoReply
林谷龍
謝謝書評，這時候才發覺沒有回到大大的留言，真得很對不住。
我再查看一下有沒有沒回到的留言。
1 month agoReply
黑靈
皮阿當依然沉不住氣，這樣要多修練才能穩重一點
2 months agoReply
林谷龍
説得沒錯，少年心性就要多磨練得沉穩一些。
2 months agoReply
半天藍
好奇一問，這個故事所橫跨的時間幅度大概多久？是一年半載還是幾代人的故事？
3 months agoReply
林谷龍
有下一代人，邊寫邊構思。


3 months agoReply
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