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CENPOR
谢谢嵐斕大大的评文，我真的真的真的非常感动。 (●'◡'●)
其实这部是重制版，旧版的已经删掉了
投稿的类别我会改动，谢谢建议
我想回应一些问题（不是借口 (/▽＼) ）
（1）我也觉得世界大战有点不适合，会换成诸国混战
（2）庄客守夜是因为凌家庄之前太过安宁了，警戒松懈了，所以遇到贼寇就完全慌了。
最后还是要说，谢谢嵐斕大大的评文！！也感谢你举办了此活动
1 year agoReply
嵐斕
凌家莊再安寧，莊客也不會去守夜吧？莊客是莊的客人，來作客的人會為整個莊守夜嗎？
也許能改成“起夜的莊客”，更有原本安寧的凌家莊受突襲的感覺。

也謝謝你來參加哦！
1 year agoReply
CENPOR
@嵐斕,这里的庄客是凌家庄的工人，不是客人 
你可能搞错了
1 year agoReply
嵐斕
@CENPOR,抱歉。我確實不太熟悉。
1 year agoReply
CENPOR
@岚斓,没事没事，这个设定我也是查看网络才知道的
1 year agoReply
嵐斕
@CENPOR
1 year agoReply
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