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深海大鳳梨 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 27!
謝謝蕈菇用心的評論 !!! 受益良多
其實關於出場腳色太多還有番外篇穿插這件事我有想過XD 只是因為寫文的時候我真的太隨興了，常常是想到甚麼寫什麼，所以架構相對鬆散，這些被點出的問題很精闢，非常感謝
1 year agoReply
魔幻蕈菇
謝謝鳳梨打賞，我還是很享受故事，也希望鳳梨產出更多好故事，希望這些建議有幫助囉🫶♥️
1 year agoReply
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