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追風尋夢
最後是把自己了結了嗎ouo
2 years agoReply
橘子樂園
沒錯，兩人賣掉僅有的東西來赴死了
2 years agoReply
魚落井
蠻喜歡用一個當下的場景兩個人的互動自然地帶出戰爭過往的敘事處理。兩人在火堆旁劈里啪啦地燃燒著情緒、傾吐話語的情節很有氛圍感，勾起我和朋友一起喝酒喝到醺醺然劈里啪啦地聊垃圾話的回憶。我很喜歡橘子以簡單的文句就塑造出那種聊到飄的感覺~

雖然結尾很有衝擊力但，我對兩人尋死的原因感到不解。是因爲軍隊在清除通信者，而他們也在清除名單中嗎？
2 years agoReply
橘子樂園
主要是過得不好啊，無論是戰前戰後。
「我為你賣命，你給了啥米？還要可能被殺？那不如乾脆了結算了。」生活沒有希望的這種感覺
2 years agoReply
魚落井
@橘子樂園, 哦哦原來如此~
2 years agoReply
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