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林墨
我的確為了加快節奏省略太多東西了。原因也是市場考量：要在前三章讓故事進入主題。
所以有很多不合理的坑都要到後面才會填上，像是男主為什麼毅然決然放棄一切前往虛幻的避難所。
感謝妳的用心閱讀，希望妳也喜歡這個故事😄
6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
不客氣😊
6 months agoReply
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