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凝雨
評分：B+

感情描寫細膩，只是用幾句簡單的句子，就表達出主角對母親的愛，我覺得很棒。如果可以再詳細交代故事起首時所指的誹聞是什麼，就更能滿足讀者的胃口了。
9 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評語：幸好找到了力量，但前面的輿論事件沒有交代的很清楚，讓我一直在故事裡尋找🤣
9 months agoReply
不勝丸
評分：B
9 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評B,感情很真摯，對媽媽的思念，媽媽的溫柔，被欺凌的難過，描寫得很細膩，但是那件緋聞是什麼，我覺得漏了描述，如果描述會深化主角的委屈。

9 months agoReply
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