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凝雨
評分：Ｂ

嘿嘿，這個故事分明應該算是R18……什麼？說是R15也可以？先不管分級，其實故事滿有趣又很易讀，只是每個章節都顯得有些零碎，以及「起承轉合」中的「承」和「轉」不夠突出，有點可惜。
9 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評分：分成小段的方式讀起來也很有趣，果然這兩位人物的取這名字都是有用意的哈哈
9 months agoReply
是南末吶！
評 分：B

嘿嘿，挺有趣的
9 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評B，故事是完整的，員外也有善用字詞，不過流暢度缺了點，我覺得過渡段不自然，不過仍是一個完整的故事。
9 months agoReply
琉璃色的（國中生）
當然，我覺得這個已經是一場車禍了🤣🤣🤣
9 months agoReply
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