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凝雨
評分：B+

故事很流暢完整，而且描述桃子時描述得太精緻，讓我有一下子誤以為自己正在看美食番呢！XD 本來我是想給A，只可惜沒有瑟瑟場面，只好扣一點分數了 (被打飛~
9 months agoReply
紫玖島
居然想看色色嗎 哈哈哈XD
寫在正篇的番外了 https://www.penana.com/article/1866877
9 months agoReply
凝雨
@紫玖島,有了🤣❤️
9 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評B+，故事完整，描寫食物很動人，在小豬的角度必然會加分，也有甜甜的戀愛，非常美的故事。
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
謝謝小豬稱讚！
10 months agoReply
皮皮
我不想看外送的過程，請給我撥桃子的過程ouo
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
好的客倌！容我找時間補補撥桃子XD
10 months agoReply
皮皮
@紫玖島,A，給我撥桃子，就給你A+
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
@皮皮,哈哈哈哈哈 好！我拚一波！
10 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
車車的畫面意外的少,還以為會開很多呢XD
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
看來我要在自己的本篇把這後續補完了（流口水貌）
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
本篇人物為我的BL小說《奪取龍心》主CP，剛好抽到這個題目寫了個七夕番外呢～
歡迎大家有空可以來看看原作喔！penana.com/story/167843
10 months agoReply
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