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妮絲 sponsored 500coins for Issue 25!
哇，感謝大佬實用的評論！

我會努力改進不足的部分！想辦法讓設定更自然地融入劇情（？，還有讓角色形象更加顯明！

至於台詞的部分……好吧，確實是我放飛自我了XDD
5 months agoReply
Tolerh
不敢不敢，Tolerh感謝您的打賞。（鞠躬
5 months agoReply
Tolerh
@妮絲
5 months agoReply
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