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月言
謝謝心得💖
一開始的篇章我還在摸索
讓故事偏日常，主線不明
夏雖然有理由
但我不想寫出來

6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
你的人物很可愛☺️如果有一個主線讓讀者更有方向感，就更好看了🥰
6 months agoReply
月言
@朝晞Ashinari ,謝謝～我盡力來找到主線💪
6 months agoReply
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