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森月日下
劳大，我这网文呐，你这文风跟魔戒一样，我咱评丫xd

这我给不了意见，我对这不熟呀，另请高见吧，这风格说不定在欧美市场受众高。
1 year agoReply
子不語
本篇直接被放生 XD
1 year agoReply
森月日下
瞎了，没看着XP，看到你这留言我才知道。
1 year agoReply
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