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薑毛辣椒
真人真事嗎？
5 years agoReply
皮影
我是參考一首日文歌《她曾經活過啊》
可以聽聽看呦 https://youtu.be/180xCt99Lec
5 years agoReply
薑毛辣椒
@皮影,原來如此！因為我都會在這創挑留言，並勇於告誡某些文章上的瑕疵。但因為這關係到很嚴重的問題，所以我才會先問。
其實呢！我覺得這篇文的情感不太真實，感覺是模仿別的作品，但也無法提出如何改善。只能說......見識多了，或許就寫得出來。
雖然我也不太能寫出來就是了XD
5 years agoReply
皮影
@薑毛辣椒,好呦，我會再我多看其他文章，好好學習✍🏻謝謝建議🥰
5 years agoReply
皮影
溫馨提醒：自殺是不能解決問題的呦，還是要愛惜生命哦～😘
5 years agoReply
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