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雨田明
評語：
能看出想讓父親得到救贖的心思和希望帶出正面訊息。建議可更著重作品的戲劇性，令故事更有趣吸引。
7 years agoReply
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100 Pena 幣已經派送給你哦！
7 years agoReply
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