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穹葉
感謝筆言的即興創作！真的是路過啊XDDDDD（各種層面上的）

可惜了字數與行數不足，不然古風真是美妙XD內容確實是「路過」，我也不好解釋什麼，詞藻優美，但不艱深難懂，腦中可有畫面，雖然絲毫不需夾帶情感，卻也有觀景的美感在。

這個畫面很美，若是換作古詩，稍改韻腳，即是上乘之作呢！

很感謝筆言大方的即興創作，喜愛之心難以言表:D
8 years agoReply
穹葉
感謝筆言參加！
只是字數跟行數不夠哦😂
8 years agoReply
筆言
抱歉呢，這段興致之作，容不下更多字數了。
8 years agoReply
穹葉
@筆言,好的，我明白了😀那沒關係，心得感想也會稍晚補上，只是恐怕就無法列入最後參賽資格，謝謝你的即興之作XDD
8 years agoReply
筆言
@穹葉, 不要緊
8 years agoReply
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