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Vincent
靈氣龐克的世界觀宏大而充滿複雜的設定。我想寫一個一話的，在這個世界的沈墨。
在眾多複雜的設定和勢力中，找最簡單最容易寫，讀者也可以簡單看懂而有一丁點內容。
最後，我選擇了原故事開頭的片段魔改。另一個夜殤，不同的夜殤作為沈墨的原型。

特別是燙手山芋《大力金身》之後所賣的價錢——三千靈珠。作一個喜感的呼應。
看了一下原故事和書評改出來的。希望沒有太大的Bug。
2 weeks agoReply
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