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Omega-3(秋雁)
@林墨
5 months agoReply
林墨
感謝評論。
目前的確人物的塑造還沒有很立體，可能要到20章以後才能完整的展現兩人各方面的特色。
旅程中兩人也會不斷的影響對方，畢竟這個主題是生存與成長。
我希望帶給讀者的是各種不同面向的末日情境，並且在這個殘酷的世界中，透漏出一些人性的光輝。
5 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
@林墨,嗯嗯，我也覺得剛開始而已
5 months agoReply
林墨
@Omega-3(秋雁),不知道為什麼，好像很少人選讀者模式。
可能大家都很精益求精，想要自己能寫得更好？
我就廢，只想表達心中所想的而已😆
5 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
@林墨,大家可能比較想要尖銳而真實的評價吧（？
5 months agoReply
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