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諾蒂西亞
文章描寫偏向西方，對於描述仔細，而且將每個用詞都直白出來。這種手法和東方主流的留白美感，給人另一種感覺。

但能看出這邊文章，確實沒有更進一步的中心思想，而且肉戲也只能說是中規中矩，尤其是結尾，讓我想吐槽是不是chatgpt寫出來的。
3 years agoReply
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