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W.H.
評分：B
10 months agoReply
璐沐
感謝評分~
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評語：喜歡年獸變成人的設定，如果故事發展成在春天的時候反而能力會增強、或是改變氣候、幫人找到春天的相反設定，年獸進而愛上春，或許連結性會更高。
10 months agoReply
璐沐
感謝講評和建議~
10 months agoReply
凝雨
評分：B

以年獸當主角，令故事趣味度提升了不少。
不過整體而言故事偏向流水帳，令人深刻的地方比較少呢~
10 months agoReply
璐沐
感謝講評(⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠)
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評B，慨念有新意，年獸被囚在春，很得意的慨念，然而，對春的描寫很少，故評B。
10 months agoReply
璐沐
感謝講評~
10 months agoReply
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