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kelcat
道心堅定，不染紅塵！
叔叔太棒了～ 🤣
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
Xdxd這招很好用！？
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
@晴空下的雨叔叔心得~請參考~
1 year agoReply
晴空下的雨
你猜得沒錯，這篇確實是故意用平淡語氣去描寫的，當然可能也和個人風格有關......畢竟我實在不擅長在短短的千字篇幅內描寫出激昂的情緒，對我來說那樣反而感覺有點刻意、難代入。

說到底，果然還是筆力不夠呢(笑

感謝心得！
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
@晴空下的雨,老樣子QQ或許這就是閣下的目的，叔叔也是照著作者意象解讀罷了，反而沒有讀者的樂趣。

或許貓貓們會有不同見解QQ"

對了，叔叔是用分析的!不是猜的!老作家了用字還那麼不精準!
1 year agoReply
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