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可鹹甜
@晴空下的雨這是叔叔的心得，請參考~
1 year agoReply
晴空下的雨
感謝心得！

這篇確實就是個短篇，因為以日記體來呈現，所以如果寫多了可能反而就...

小孩的年紀，我預定是更小一點，可能只有三、四歲左右。

總之，果然就算是短篇，也還是得寫長一點呢XD


1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
@晴空下的雨這麼小能想那麼多嗎QQ

目的導向吧@@

看閣下想表達何種效果，如果是淡淡的哀傷，此篇足以。

但是不吸晴。

個人淺見QQ
1 year agoReply
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