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可鹹甜
@紫玖島看那麼快是吧@_@
1 year agoReply
紫玖島
好 布丁來讀讀～
1 year agoReply
餅貓
@紫玖島,謝謝🫶
1 year agoReply
餅貓
搬運我的想法>>

我讀到後面有一種體感浮在表層的感受，前面的章節，我覺得大家應該能帶入主角的感覺(大概像是漂浮在他肩膀旁，一起看著的感覺，偶爾能直接帶入他的感覺。）。
越到後面越覺得有種——
浮在空中與主角隔著一層的感覺(好抽象的形容），不知道是什麼造成的原因ʕ⁠´⁠•⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠`⁠ʔ？
1 year agoReply
餅貓
題外話：上面的圖是用Midjourney 生成的，這張超好看的...，分享給大家~~
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
內文請修改至300字內，3qq
1 year agoReply
餅貓
@可鹹甜,很抱歉我沒有注意到字數！
已經修改了，感謝可鹹甜的提醒🫶
1 year agoReply
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