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雅卡琪
如果劇情是男主跟女主是有很好的感情基礎，我是建議你可以寫兩人感情穩定，或者狗血一點製造一點意外，讓兩人知道要珍惜另一半之類的。
但如果本來就很不好，那可以製造一點驚喜，比如說原本雙方就看不順眼了，可是身邊的朋友卻一直撮合之類的。

我不知道你主要的劇情是寫到哪裡，不過我覺得劇情要有點轉折才會讓讀者有又驚又喜的感覺。
希望你能寫出好的故事，加油喔！
5 years agoReply
T少
https://www.penana.com/story/73188，多謝指點，歡迎來海王國遊玩及打賞。😘
5 years agoReply
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