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子不語
看完，銜接到臨淵的地方。

感覺起來白晚跟臨淵的性格有點難以辨明，混在一起了。除了他跟魔尊寒獄的半血親兄弟之間的不陸有塑造出角色點之外，他跟他師尊的角色清晰度沒有做出來，都是高冷然後依戀某一個人，但沒有能讓讀者留下深刻印象的點。

事實上，這幾回我最有角色記憶點的，是個性張狂但內裡也是很衝突的魔尊寒獄。 O_o
23 hours agoReply
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