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玖璃
海超美0//0 詩也很棒
9 years agoReply
Setsuna
謝謝你 :)
9 years agoReply
兀心
這句型好工整wwww
9 years agoReply
Setsuna
想帶出一種節奏感
就像一首樂曲XD
9 years agoReply
兀心
@Setsuna,可以唱的那種嗎？ＸＤＤ
9 years agoReply
Setsuna
@兀心,不，純音樂XD
9 years agoReply
兀心
@Setsuna,原來是舞曲，了解ＸＤＤＤＤ
9 years agoReply
Setsuna
@兀心,要說是舞曲也有可能的。它的定位是幻想曲（即興創作的曲目），而即興就是甚麼都OK XD
我在寫的時候沒有特別想過是不是舞曲便是了
9 years agoReply
兀心
@Setsuna,了解～ＸＤ

我一直想雪雪是邊用一蹦一蹦的雀躍步伐在散步的，才冒出這首詩ＸＤ
9 years agoReply
Setsuna
@兀心,哈哈，我當時只是簡單地漫步。
因為整晚沒吃過甚麼，而且有點累，沒有太多體力XD
9 years agoReply
兀心
@Setsuna,飲食要正常啦><
9 years agoReply
Setsuna
@兀心,吃得很正常啊，今晚才剛吃了焗葡國雞飯XD (喂
當時因為整個午夜沒睡，而我是不會在十二時後進食的，所以到早上時就覺得餓了。不過這已經是半年前的事了。
9 years agoReply
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