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大正
看下來，我絕對是流水帳專業戶之一
5 days agoReply
小魚一尾
我們一起來寫流水帳🥹
5 days agoReply
大正
@小魚一尾,我發現你的心得寫得好認真！！好作家值得推廣！！！
4 days agoReply
小魚一尾
@嶼與
1 month agoReply
嶼與
我會希望作品不要按照普通套路走！標示甜文是因為貝塔讀者說很甜蜜，我就不該輕信賊人，那是正在三刷咆哮山莊的女人啊 (蹲牆角

比起成長弧線會更想展示角色的切面，因為不希望它變成含有過多冗餘訊息的流水帳，這個應該比較難更動ToT 情緒波動的話，我個人偏好不要讓痛苦的角色大哭大鬧，首先顯得有點廉價，其次兩位主角自尊都很強，這種人一般比較壓抑w

字數問題我也想過！慣例應該是2000，我期待讀者可以解析更細緻的權力翻轉或者小動作才把字數壓在500，根據大大的反饋好像不太有用，我會再思考如何改進的🥲🥲

總而言之，非常感謝大大的時間與心得回饋！
1 month agoReply
小魚一尾
@嶼與,也謝謝你的參與～其實我不成熟的想法是說字數的因素斷點太多太快讀者體驗會有點追不上，至於角色的壓抑會寫得更多（個人想法）祝福你寫作順利～
1 month agoReply
嶼與
@小魚一尾, 好的 謝謝！
1 month agoReply
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