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Miracle
謝謝你欸，你提到的缺點有一半是我想要的東西，哈哈😂
有達到效果，很感謝
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
作者自己有全知視角，基本上一定有盲點，我也不例外。所以才寫這些編輯出來輔助看文。
有第二屆，如果有新篇章或是修改，歡迎再回來。他們可以根據前後比對告訴你對於文章優化的程度喔
9 months agoReply
Miracle
@伐伐伐木工,我有仔細研究了，目前結構沒更改但敘事方式大修改
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
@Miracle,可以在發新的.這樣就有專屬於你的新舊紀錄了
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
@Miracle,久等了，已經好了~
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
這場活動，是我們共同的旅程。如果說評文是地圖，那麽每部作品就是沿途的風景。我的《魔法工藝師》也在其中一站，如果你路過了，不妨稍作停留，風景還不錯。penana.com/story/192009
9 months agoReply
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