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Lura
好酷喔！第一人稱描寫欸！
好新奇，又不會覺得奇怪或彆扭
而且你的景物描寫，再說一次，真的超～強！❤️

整體評價：A+++++😍
10 months agoReply
Nanami七海
第一人稱感覺有什麼不同嗎@@
10 months agoReply
Lura
@Nanami海,看起來的感覺會不太一樣🤔
對我來說啦😂
10 months agoReply
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