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素素
小女子對俊男一見鍾情，無以為報，以身相許，哈哈哈！

不過我猜楊雲不會接受，否則加入了他教丫環練武功情節，就變成多餘了。
1 year agoReply
覺非(Benny Chan)
居然被妳看出來了, 厲害! 
小翠也是重要的角色, 不過目前還不會發揮重要的作用. 謝謝支持!
1 year agoReply
所謂時窮節乃見，一個人的堅持只有在生死關頭或是利益當前，才會顯露出來。

楊雲能夠為了心中信念放棄兒女私情，高官厚祿，榮華富貴，絕對是個人物。

不過文字渲染上欠點力度。加油！
1 year agoReply
覺非(Benny Chan)
我始終不擅長氣勢的描術, 用詞也過於平凡, 欠缺天馬行空. 我會努力學習一下!
1 year agoReply
@覺非(Benny Chan),其實你的文字已經很好，只是平常說幾句，希望可以更進一步xd
1 year agoReply
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