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朝花夕拾
看希洛又緊張又笑超可愛，意外——就是你了希洛大人！

哇，這群人太得寸進尺了吧！希洛可忍薇雅不可忍，給他們好看～！
9 months agoReply
魯嚕嚕
夏奇薇雅：居然出意外了！是誰出包呀？😠咦？是希洛大人？那......沒事。😊

希洛其實也忍不住了XD🤭
9 months agoReply
TING
夏奇薇雅真的真的好聰明，不僅預料到黑豹的出現，甚至已經學會該如何運用出擊的技巧🥹👏🏻

人果然都是傾向欺負弱者的，無奈目前的希洛沒有能力反抗，多一事不如少一事，惹麻煩上身絕對不是好事，特別是他需要保護夏奇薇雅🥲

話雖如此，但真的很想揍到這個強森倒地不起，這種人是需要一點教訓😤
11 months agoReply
魯嚕嚕
揍下去了！真的揍下去了！「強森大哥被殺啦！」🤣
11 months agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
前半的對話句連續太多囉，可以適當用敘述句切開。
1 year agoReply
魯嚕嚕
筆記，感謝！
1 year agoReply
羽璇
馬的，態度是在囂張幾點啊！！
真想好好揍他幾頓！

希洛是個意外，莫名被小小嫌棄惹，哈哈
1 year agoReply
魯嚕嚕
他沒表明身分前，基本上不會被認出來是艾爾的，又因為他相貌斯文，身材比較瘦弱，看起來就很好欺負的樣子，所以......XD
1 year agoReply
嚮往國度
我想借借那本查理王子ㄉ狩獵書XD
1 year agoReply
魯嚕嚕
噓……裡面有附贈王子的裸上身玉照唷！
1 year agoReply
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