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黑心小兔
很妙的是，其實讀者知道他睡錯了

看到他震驚烙跑覺得挺可愛的

會很想看下一章，看看怎麼找他算帳的。
1 year agoReply
橘柚
哈哈，每個留言都是，睡錯人了！
1 year agoReply
橘柚
@永玄，來囉～！
1 year agoReply
永玄
感謝橘柚用心的回答！看完感覺有解了一些疑惑，我目前斷章也儘量都留懸念之類的
但關於用劇情去推感情的部分，想問你有時候感情會不會控制不住一寫下去又多佔一兩章，然後就會顯得劇情都沒在推進的感覺？
1 year agoReply
橘柚
@永玄,我是不會，因為我是以劇情推動感情，談情時一定會安排劇情來走，會有目的性。
1 year agoReply
永玄
@橘柚,原來如此！感謝你，學到了～
1 year agoReply
橘柚
@永玄,如還有什麼困惑,可以再一起討論~👍
1 year agoReply
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