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凝雨
評分：C

這是一篇模仿新聞稿的作品，內容簡潔清晰有條理。奈何整體而言比較沈悶，而且與「春」這個題目的連結性不夠。若果下次有機會，可以嘗試將「新聞稿」改為「訪談」，這樣會顯得活潑生動一點。
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：C
評語：覺得整篇類似報導，好像不是短篇文章或小說等具故事性的內容，跟春的連結也不是很強。
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評C，雖說是春寒，但是仍覺得與春關系太少，故評C。
10 months agoReply
Zachary608P
當春季的潮溼幾乎消散，而又不知道想做甚麼，逛海邊、逛山徑，你居住的地方，不單單只是一片水泥森林...這是市區與郊野毗鄰的一大好處。
10 months agoReply
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