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凝雨
評分：B
其實每一幕也描述得不錯，只是我覺得這部作品比較像新詩，較適合參加之前「咏詩」的部份~
10 months agoReply
琉璃色的（國中生）
謝謝評語^ω^（前幾天才看到有這個考試🥲）
10 months agoReply
凝雨
@只是一個國中生…,可惜了，不過現在參加也不遲~
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：A
評語：隨著一幕幕切換，好似跟著您一起經歷了各種春，與自身的連結也很強～
10 months agoReply
琉璃色的（國中生）
謝謝評語^ω^
10 months agoReply
存在
評分：A
10 months agoReply
琉璃色的（國中生）
謝謝評價^ω^
10 months agoReply
Omega-3(秋雁)
評分:B
有點像《遊園驚夢》，不過更加夢幻
10 months agoReply
琉璃色的（國中生）
謝謝評語^ω^
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評A 用詩句說明了年月的逝去，本來沒明言春，然而最後點明題旨，四季對我而方相同，只是輪迴，然而，有你在，就是春天。
美好的就在眼前。
喜歡這文的意境，意味深長。
10 months agoReply
琉璃色的（國中生）
謝謝評語^ω^
10 months agoReply
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