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評分：B
10 months agoReply
好好吃雪糕
目前獲得最高評分XD
感謝！
10 months agoReply
凝雨
評分：C
如果不是以「春」為題，這篇作品我會評為B，因為故事的整體氣氛控制得不俗。奈何這篇作品與「春」的關聯甚少，所以不好意思，只能給予不太高的分數。
10 months agoReply
好好吃雪糕
感謝評分，我主要是想用春的視角看見遠處的冬。
只是擬人的太過頭了，人總是比較會注意他人-w-
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評B-

重改勉強和春有連繫，再看多次文章是想說女主的溫暖像春，只是關連仍是有點少，故改評分為B-
10 months agoReply
好好吃雪糕
已經補好了，原本一開始想埋那個呼應，不過想藏的深一點，結果被誤會了XDD
把原本刪掉的詞句加回來，希望這會讓文章想表達的意境更清楚^v^b
10 months agoReply
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