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小豬瑩瑩
謝謝批評。
5 years agoReply
介鶴吉
總覺得這篇文的畫面不錯，但就是描述上不夠唯美
以下是我的建議，可以參考看看
你我對視許久。
我捧著你的頭，親吻後道了聲晚安。

讓畫面唯美的斬首變態，形成強烈對比，會讓人意猶未盡，最後的晚安，還能吐露出主角是不是變態到每天都有親頭顱的例行公事？
5 years agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
改了有沒有恐佈些？
5 years agoReply
癇派 ⍢⃝و
覺得有變態的味道了 XD
謝謝參與！💕💕
5 years agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
多謝評論，想試試兩句嚇著別人，看來可以驚嚇一些。
5 years agoReply
癇派 ⍢⃝و
是個斬人頭顱ㄉ變態齁齁，覺得可以加個跟頭顱接吻之類的也不錯www
感謝參與 (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)
5 years agoReply
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