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Vincent
原作者的確沒有指明蜜莉恩有沒有利用村民。


利用村民是我加上去的設定。
不過新一版的蜜也足夠深度。
我也很喜歡。
1 week agoReply
無名
原作者的設定是「避免讓人受到傷害」，利用村民感覺完全偏離這方向了……

題目有說不能違背原作者初設定之意，只能如此修改。

後續劇情也需注意一下。
1 week agoReply
Vincent
@無名,好的，我想想怎修。
1 week agoReply
無名
@Vincent ,應該用這版就行了。
1 week agoReply
Vincent
@無名,用了，改了小許。
1 week agoReply
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