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韓麥可
@AnFr安鍅
1 month agoReply
AnFr安鍅
只看前幾章確實會鬼打牆，但該小說有強調每一篇章可獨立閱讀，所以這樣的劇情應該是沒有問題的（？
其次，女主並沒有精神分裂，信的部分確實是寫錯名字，但後段是被刻意安排冒用身份。
1 month agoReply
韓麥可
@AnFr安鍅,原來如此，是我理解錯誤，我對我的疏失道歉。

每一篇章能獨立閱讀，推測可能有失連貫性，長達100多篇的小說沒有連貫性是硬傷。

當然這只是我的看法，可能有他的受眾在，感謝參與。
1 month agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@韓麥可,也謝謝你的評語，你給出的建議我會採納，並參考。
1 month agoReply
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