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老薑糖
我有一個小小小小的想法

有沒有考慮試試看用長短句來營造戰鬥上的壓迫感和速度感

之前練習過幾次，寫出來的感覺完全不同，但我還在練習！打戲真的好難呀！
5 months agoReply
七里浮香
謝謝，很好的提議，我試試
5 months agoReply
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