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海牢
抱歉最近有點忙

我只能說對我來說，評價算是非常高了，確實有很多該注意的東西或者對於角色的描述需要多加著墨。

感謝評語，我覺得對於之後的重寫會是很大的養分，感謝你花時間把他看完。

然後我的功課抱歉讓我拖到出完差之後再交出了。

BTW 我會盡力注意錯字的 感謝
1 year agoReply
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