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楊郁
突然長篇幅補設定感覺有點突然~

不過角色塑造方面仍是下了不少苦功，尤其是自帶實力的配角
2 months agoReply
隱
我有意識到過度資訊傾倒這一點......
還在努力調整中QQ

怎麼樣將設定融入劇情我還得多練習呢！
2 months agoReply
楊郁
@隱, 最穩固的做法是分開不同章節補設定吧
2 months agoReply
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