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W.H.
感謝再度參與❤️

這首三行詩，其實應該是四行詩吧～結構會比較均衡。

詩的內容讓人深思👍

祝中秋快樂！！
2 years agoReply
清夢
WH大也中秋快樂！

其實本來只想到下兩句，前兩句是後來加上的，倒是畫龍點睛了。
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@清夢,我是W.H.哦，Pnn 有另一位蕉友暱稱W，所以寫清楚比較好～

penana.com/article/1069166

我這個創挑系列還會再辦下去 (請詳見題目簡介，昨晚有修正)，可能也會玩一下四行詩，歡迎再來參加 (不妨礙課業的前提下～
2 years agoReply
清夢
@W.H.,好的！
2 years agoReply
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