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CF LAM
星野大大筆下第一次出現這種不是戰鬥的戰鬥（好像是第一次），卻意外令人感動 ，如果不是因為我在通勤途中追看，可能就要哭了🙂

話說，好不容易有俘虜了另一位少女的芳心，她又要死了嗎？我有沒有理解錯文未的意思？

也許時河的命就是光棍🫣
1 week agoReply
星野維
我在寫得時候就想寫一段不是純戰鬥的畫面，最後誕生了現在的結局。
1 week agoReply
黑正
好不容易……😮‍💨
2 weeks agoReply
星野維
真的是好不容易。
但也恭喜時河創下抽取基因的壯舉（雖然這一段劇情在現實中完全不合理就是了）
2 weeks agoReply
CF LAM
@星野維,異能戰鬥的劇情本來就不用合理，如果要考究，基因雙螺旋序列根本就不是文中說的樣子呀！

最重要是夠熱血，夠感動，人物夠立體。而你做到了！
1 week agoReply
星野維
@CF LAM,感謝大大！我還擔心不合理會被說刻意，所以這一段當時在寫很掙扎。
1 week agoReply
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