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虛冲
評分：B
10 months agoReply
魚
感謝評分——✓
10 months agoReply
存在
評分：B
10 months agoReply
魚
感謝評分——✓
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評語：目前的意象還是以冬多一些，建議開頭的羽毛換成花來代表春會比較適宜，例如看到第一片落花，就會怎樣怎樣營造連結會更好。
10 months agoReply
魚
感謝評分及評語♡
10 months agoReply
凝雨
評分：B

看作者的筆觸，相信是年紀比較小的文手。
作者努力嘗試把「春」的特質，例如：新生、希望和療癒等放進故事內，儘管效果未必很理想，但用字淺白讓人不算反感，如果可以在劇情編排和表達上多下苦功，相信將來會有顯著的進步呢~
10 months agoReply
魚
感謝評分及評語♡
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評C 雖說春，但是故事不完整，小豬有點迷惘文中想表達什麼，故評C。
10 months agoReply
魚
感謝評分及評語♡
10 months agoReply
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