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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
第一回時開始懷疑自己死了，妹妹也直接告訴他死了。
我有點混亂，到底他是死了沒有？
未知其他讀者的想法，但我因為開始時摸不清角色的狀態，投入不來，而且主角的行為有點跳躍，空間也十分跳躍。不過總算知道主線是寫個故事... ...如果沒看錯的話。
5 years agoReply
雷迪
被妹妹看到自己寫的妹控小說，是哪種羞恥PLAY嗎XD？
5 years agoReply
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