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楠都月
謝謝來看啊！🌟
時狩者實力其實跟魔力有關
不過也有不少靠努力訓練而提升實力

回憶插入方面其實我接收過正面和負面評價（ 所以老實說也不太清楚這樣做好不好，但是寫着寫着就已經完了一卷就算了..... 

一開始文筆還不是很熟練，所以還有一些未很完善的方面（ 後面在努力改善了🥹

我之後就來看大大的作品！🌟☺️
2 days agoReply
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