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熊兒 sponsored 500coins for Issue 21!
感謝大大非常快速有效率的心得！！！

確實因為是剛開始，為了帶入世界觀、事件、主角個性跟規則等等，刻意縮減了戰鬥畫面，以免元素過多。

描寫戰鬥的畫面，後續事件中會再多一些~~~~也是我正在努力精進的元素之一！

再次感謝閱讀與心得！(*^▽^*)
7 months agoReply
鶄
感謝打賞！我明白啊，我只是自私地想多看一點(笑死
7 months agoReply
熊兒
@鶄,(´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)~~~
7 months agoReply
凝雨
好快！
7 months agoReply
鶄
我今天day off呢 🐹
7 months agoReply
凝雨
@鶄,👍
7 months agoReply
鶄
@熊兒
7 months agoReply
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